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Old 04-13-05, 07:07 PM   #13
Kawn Flixx
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Ahh... this was an okay drop..
Really wasnt feeling it as much...
Your structure was shaky, really need to work on matching your bars
some of your "punchlines" were weak ass shyt .. and not fitten well...
this wasnt that great of a diss to yayo just really 2 bars that hit okay
and they were:
I'm ready for beef don't care if you don't like me.
Your whole flowing style is planier than a white-tee.
Yayo just loves me and wants to be Tony Green.
Cause I'll blow his alias like its the name of Twista's CD.
^thats probably the only 4 lines...
Keep it up elevate , and drop a link or this will be closed
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