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Old 04-13-05, 07:09 PM   #6
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Voted For: Black Queen

Aight..

Black Queen: 6/10

You Had Some Aight Metaphors and Punches...Some Lines Fell off and Were Fillers and Wack. Your Vocab Wasn't Too Bad and Structure Was Decent.

Buch Shot.: 4/10

You Had One Decent Punch, but The Rest of Your Verse Was Shitty In My Eyes. Just Old and Not Enjoyable. No Vocab and Every Bar Delt With Sexual Content. Be Original and Bust Some Sick Metas Man. Structure Was Aight.

Overall Vote: Black Queen For More Punches and Better Verse.

~R~