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THIS AINT NO BEEF FORUM !! BEEF AGAIN AND I'LL BAN ALL OF YOU FROM OM'S
Now ...this was an okay drop...
Not the best ive seen ... you structure's were good
hook was decent...could have been alot better..
psome punch's were okaY..some were just plain weak..
overall maybe if you use alittle more punchlines..
and use alittle feeling , and some emotions you might be going through..
and you'll have a dope drop..
PS: Drop a link ro this will be closed
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