DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Aight Check IT..
MarvJay: 7/10
You Had Personals all Throughout This Verse With Some Nice Hitting Punches. Your Vocab Wasn't Much, and Structure Is Stretched but The Verse Was Nice. Punches and Personals Won This For You.
Invekitive: 5/10
You Tried Personals but The Set-Up and Overall Punches Weren't Hitting Hard. You Need To Get Your Concepts and Directions Through Ya Verse Originized With Better Presence. Stretched Lines As Well...Not Much Vocab.
Overall Vote: MarvJay For Better Punches and Personals.
~R~
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