Hell yeah
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Voted For: T-Dot
iight...pretty easy one,you had way better vocab and structure,nice multis,iight last line was like wack lol,but meh the rest was dope:
Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Buck's makin' whack open mic's talented like Clay Aiken
very very dope
Leave this site, your not wanted... your screams are taunted
After I win this Buck, your dreams are going to be haunted
u know what i think of this lol
iight buck battle like CALI lol,i never really liked rimes like ABAB,know what i meen?,
dont even have ta drop a line......
....Ya flows cooked like Raw Meat
You know this aint your Time....
....Ya sell by date Expired last Week!
not very good
You aint at your Peak, like chicklets that cant Fly
Its like ya mom ''cut off your wings''...
....you aint never gonna be High!
i liked this one
anyway easy one,
vote T-Dot
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