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Old 04-13-05, 09:32 PM   #2
Speats
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iight...pretty easy one,you had way better vocab and structure,nice multis,iight last line was like wack lol,but meh the rest was dope:
Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Buck's makin' whack open mic's talented like Clay Aiken

very very dope

Leave this site, your not wanted... your screams are taunted
After I win this Buck, your dreams are going to be haunted

u know what i think of this lol

iight buck battle like CALI lol,i never really liked rimes like ABAB,know what i meen?,

dont even have ta drop a line......
....Ya flows cooked like Raw Meat
You know this aint your Time....
....Ya sell by date Expired last Week!

not very good

You aint at your Peak, like chicklets that cant Fly
Its like ya mom ''cut off your wings''...
....you aint never gonna be High!

i liked this one

anyway easy one,

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