23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP:
Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
Weak Battle:
Mahatma Ghand- Whack Ass Name By The Way..No Hate..Lol..But your verse was straight man..nice flow, i enjoyed reading it and your structure was consistent...i saw that u had a nice personal in there and flipped it into a punch..that was a good one..you still have to work on your wordplay and punches..i thought your punches were weak..your closer was weak man..no punch there wats-so-ever..
Stanza- good verse man..really enjoyed reading this piece as well..punches were stronger than MG's but your personals were blah..no hate..that preacher line was not that good man..your closer was also weak man..intro was aite..and the debt line was aite..flow was a little choppy at times..good structure though..
vote- Mahatma Ghand..i liked his personal..to me personals won it..everything else was kind of a tie to me..other than dat it came down to personals..and stanza your personal attempt was failed..MG your personal was weak but still hit..
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