Thread: my life as a dawg bark nigga
View Single Post
Old 04-14-05, 04:08 AM   #2
Tha Q
FiVe SoUrCe CeO
 
Tha Q's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,701
IP:

some good metas

but the rhyming was off-kilter


paragraph structure difficult to read

not bad


keep at it


1
Send a message via AIM to Tha Q   Reply With Quote