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Old 04-14-05, 06:48 AM   #7
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this verse had alot more hotter punchlines and it had better flow both structures were okay and thought tenchnical came hot aswell but you didn't hit very hard wid some of your punchlines it was a good battle but my vote has to go to marvejay return the vote for my battle

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