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Old 04-14-05, 07:16 AM   #26
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knock: your punches was straight just need to work on gettin them set up straight...then they'd be fire. your structure is decent, none of your lines were stretched. which was good but you need to have all your lines lined up. that way it looks decent. multi's there was no multi's at all.

Solo: keep elevating you'll get there soon famz. flow was aiight but it would sound better if you had multi's...your structure was ok. accually better then knocks....punches were weak though. none hard hitting.

so overall my vote goes to knock

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