Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv got this cuz of his punches...nice closer...nice werdplay...good structure...couldve used some multies or improved vocab though

pyronix, i wasnt impressed by this verse if u are an alias but the opener wasnt great and the closer was okay...good strucutre, but thats bout it for real...multies vocab flow and punches all cooodve been worked on in my opinion

both cood work on multies and vocab

v/marvjay1009

rtf..
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...19&page=1&pp=15

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