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Old 04-14-05, 10:30 AM   #38
Sean Gunner
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Decent battle.

MA:
Punches were ok, but your flow kept falling off. Not huge, but enough to be choppy. Personals were nice. Good dirt, but they could have been made a lot better. Too much stating and not enough punching. No real wordplay or multis. Overall decent verse, but work on inegrating some wordplay and better punches.

Jud:
Ok punches, but you lacked in real personals. You had some wordplay but other than that nothing that good. Lot of self glorification, and weak punches just overall. Work on better personals and punches. I didn't like you homo punch, played man.

Overall both of you need to work on your punches.

v/ Mista Authentiq
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