Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv....not a bad verse, didnt think it was your best, but i was feeling it, had a good flow and you kept it consistent through the whole verse, which is good, nothing really stood out that much, you were mainly doing personals, which is cool, but you still took this...structure a little off at times, but we all know what you're capable off, word....keep up man

technical....meh, had nothing special, you were trying wordplay, but it came off too basic and didn't really diss, like the opener....that was bunk.....friends with strobe? smells fake to me....closer was decent, had the best flow and structure too...i still think you're stretching your lines man....uh, nothing really stood out, you came too basic and thats why you aren't gettin my vote, alot of times your lines are just random statements....like the opening line, it was just a multi rhyme attempt...and the KLL line,,,,,yes, he is in a gimmick match set up by the mod? how is that a diss.......well, you still have room to elevate....no hate

v/marvjay1009....rtf in the sig if you could

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