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Originally Posted by fluidmoon
Your flow was good, but it seemed you tried too hard to get the rhyme scheme to be perfect rhymes
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that i agree with 1000% you worked too hard on flow and not hard enough on quality here vocab was good at times but seemed strained as if it aint fit imagery could also be better here i think you should basically just let yourself flow dont try so hard and it will come more natural
