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Old 04-14-05, 03:22 PM   #18
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throw a punch im throwin~three, his verse is shit and so~is~he/
but its pretty bad im hotter than u, even when "A/C's" blowin~me/
^^ac.acuity....i bet no1 got that, it took me a minute
im pressin up against this pussy like tight bikinies~in, breezy~wind/
but i dont know if i should talk shit or thank him for the easy~win/
^^lol,...........kinda've a filler
i cant believe the nerve~of~herbs acuity dont deserve~a~verse/
my words'll~hurt ur words~get~burnt, u come wit sweet bars like u serve~dessert/
^^this was decent...not very hard hitting though
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damn...this flowed perdy well,lose the //(its noobish)lol
overall your punches were decent but dont mention I
in ya verses....it comes off as self glorification.....

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You a warrior nigga like shaka Zulu, fighting sum1 more powerful than the sun
Like his dumbass, u runnin at me with a spear, im laughin in the cut wid ma gattling gun
^^weak opener....what was the point??
You get no responses afta requesting a sig, why shud GFX heads bother
Cos they know, battling me..uve dug ur grave kid, and ull be deleted from RV's roster
^^ok,.not really a punch though
U and wackness have a chemical attraction,ur in love, i can see it in ur lyrical interactions
So I'll throw an axe at you face and head, so u got a slit to match the one between ur legs
^^this did not flow at all(i thought you were an audio head)?
how can all these bars not flow????
if your gonna stretch ya shit out you need an inner ryhme scheme acuity....
overall i dont even think you had one punch in this
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!