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Old 04-14-05, 06:48 PM   #55
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

iight lets start with showtime!
Shit wasn't hitting to hard you had a couple good bars structure was off vocab was cool
fav lines was
lets get this shit poppin, Lyrical Mastamind...
your name is fake it should be, Lyrical Disaster-Time...
now the beast has emerged, teachin you to plot the blueprint...
you must be a square, you and the winners circle arent congruent...
You started off good but you ended kind of bad!


LyricalMa$termind
You came on strong vocab was good structure was kind of shakey at spots but was still hitting you also came on hard merk his ass but it was kind of hard to read.
Fav lines was
My viscious rhymes fill and wrap your brain like lyrical vines/
Palestinian bombs couldn't phase my adamantium rhymes/
Spittin psychological testaments that wipe out tenements without hesitance/
Envy's evident while you're regrettin facin this one-man armored regiment/
street sweeperz, mackz n 44's limit ya lifeline wit no doubt/
22 lines to murk u/ bitch now im out
That shit was hot as fuck
but umm overall my vote goes to........
vote=LyricalMa$termind
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