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Old 04-14-05, 07:50 PM   #7
Kawn Flixx
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Sorry , but this is some honest feed
and i wasnt feeling it at all , you really need to elevate
Your structure was horrible... no real punchlines..
Looks like something you didnt put time into ...
Overall you need to elevate alot.. keep it up

Drop a link or to an OM' you have left decent feedback to or this will be closed
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