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This was an okay drop..like daz said please next time come alittle more origonal..
To start off your structure was off , next time try to match up your barz...
Second try to make harder punchlines , that ppl havent heard before...
Work on showing alittle more effort into your work... maybe some emotions to make ..
it stand out.. overall it was a decent drop... could have been alot better..
if you use better wordplay, and elevate your vocab
keep it up
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