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Old 04-14-05, 11:43 PM   #13
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thats dope... not the verse that was good but whats dope is daz is uppin this after solo dissed him

true dopeness

anyways this was a good piece some hard punches and nice metaphors got real personal on esco... your whole section on marv wasnt that good though.. it was the end of the piece so you slacked off a bit but the rest of it was good... some decent wordplay and flow..

overall: 7.5/10
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