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Old 04-15-05, 12:56 PM   #3
Calm
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cool. i liked this one. wish it was longer, and that u elaborated a lil more on your relationship with the other person. I assume you are talking to your ex girl, after a bad break up. nice vocab but your descriptions were vague. i like the fact that it seems like a personal theme in that its something that happened to you or something u went through. but i wanna be able to feel your emotion as you do. this was still nice. keep doing ya thing

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