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Old 04-15-05, 01:23 PM   #17
Adam
 
Posts: 13,383
From: Canada
This was feedback posted for Kesse

IP:

Open battle?, you came quick, but your click just can’t pick
Clear from your rhymes, unlike your avatar you can’t “be sick”
Not that good...one word multies are wack too...6/10
Family links? wackness got me thinking you and Red Bulls related
Coz both seem to be backward just like the place that your located
More of a diss to me...but props on the last line...7/10
To “picture” a “perfect” win is impossible like your next front line
Established? A crew based on quantity, coz half this board easily got signed
He isn't in Establishment anymore...so it seems like you prewrote this in my mind.../not dissing him anyways...5/10
My talent you can’t find, in your name kesse “seeks” to acquire my skill
But it ain’t contagious and so battling me would never make you “ill”
Play.../self glory....4/10
Fill your lines, face it your less than me, you can’t run “solo K”
Coz today I’m taken this battle, make you wanna hide your record away
[B]Self glory again....3/10


25/50


eh..........i got lazy and didn't want to break down kesses...i allready told him it was good....just feedback though cause you'll be like that dickriding blah blah ima baby wah wah...shut up now..