Yoooooooooo what's up shorty! Well, this was def. differnt. It was enjoyable to read and a good drop. Up your vocab. Your structure was stright I guess. yeah, It will be dope to watch you grow as a writer and maybe we can work on somethin together sometime.
Late
Sweft

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Yo, you from Detroit. Wow, gotta lot of ppl I been seein from the D! Yo, I grew up like, Springwells and Center. Where you stay at!
I goto Texas State so im not their. But where you stay!
Late(again)

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