hmmmmmmmmm...it flows nice but your not really saying nothing u mention a few topics but don't really stick wit one...its more of a brag track but its got no punchlines....u shoulda threw a few good punches in there if u was gon brag...vocab is real basic...pop, stop, top...this are ya rhyming words man...u should up those slightly an make them multie syllabe rhymes it would flow iller an be unique from what game & 50 did....cuz as is now its basically gonna flow liek original track an jus be in your voice...u wanna own the beat an out-do the original so a rewrite would prolly make this way iller.

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