Thread: "Chapter One"
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Old 04-16-05, 12:23 AM   #3
Sick ILL CeLL
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beat is aigh...Not really feeling the flow...i heard some lines were rushed...Delivery needs work...no joke or anything, but it sounds like your taking a shit when u spit lol...Lyrics is coo...chorus is ok...add more layers to it, it sounds real boring...quality could use some work...decent drop, but still need some polishing...
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