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Old 04-16-05, 03:38 AM   #16
B. Magik
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Voted For: Stanza

Mahatma Ghand:


Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight*
My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate

^ weak...4/10

This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself*
No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf

^No...3/10

Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?*
Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.*

^ Sickness and went don't rhyme dumbass...2/10

You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids
................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch

^ Weak set-up and weak punch...4/10

like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset*
You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette

^Nope...not workin...4/10

Overall, 17/50...terrible verse man...punches were garbage, personals suck...you really need elevation bad...



Stanza:

Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick
I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick

^Decent opener, coulda been better...6/10

Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul
he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole

^Hmm...decent punch I guess...kinda played...5/10

This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping
Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar

^LMAO...funny shit, but didn't rhyme...6/10 because I laughed

Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat
Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet?

^Nope...weak...4/10

Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk
Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/]

^Best line of your verse...nice closer...7/10

28/50

Both verses could use work, but Stanza came harder in his verse than that other kid...v/ stanza
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