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Old 04-16-05, 01:06 PM   #8
~Lady Fiya~
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this battle was not anything like i expected... it was very one-sided in my opinion, the candle line and SCENTS are played to all hell, aurora you stopped rhyming after you first two bars, not even suffix rhyme = ( ... the line that was the best outta both was the opener but aurora because it was creative sum what... and the handsome in the dark line was str8 up gay, don't use that no more.. stay up, 1

v/ aurora
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