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This was a pretty decent peice... i liked it
not your best work that ive seen ...but it was good
Strcture was good, you had lots of feeling , and emotions...
You had nice imagery... Nice topic... overall it was a cool peice..
thought you could have put alittle more feeling into it...
alittle short for me but it was decent...keep it up
DONT FORGET TO DROP A LINK!
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