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Haha! this was a dope read...
alittle short though , but it was nice ...
An odd topic to write about but it was really making alot of sense..
you had lots of emotions ... Lots of feeling , and some nice imagery..
the best line in this drop would probably have to be :
Look every tugboat has its day then will sink and wilt for ages
As people skim your life's story skipping the whole 200 pages
Word i was really feeling that . nice shyt led ..keep it up
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