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Old 04-16-05, 02:23 PM   #2
Calm
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ok u had me confused. i thought this peice was going in one direction then it went sumwhere else...i'm not exactly sure who this person u are referring to is. especially since u started talkin to/about him so late in the poem. i thought u were on the path alone. and not only that you originally stated that the tears and blood on your shirt didnt come from u. then u switch and said your eyes were bleeding....so i'm lost man

please leave feed on one of my pieces in my sig, thanks
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-Transcending The Heavens-
I am before before...
Before death is eternity, After death is eternity.
There is no death, only eternity.
And I be riding the wings of eternity...



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