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Blah, alittle to simple for me ... lines were just basic..
Punchlines were there but they werent hitten hard..
You personals were okay, but alittle to simple to catch my attention..
structure was good , nice way to dress up your verse , and bold ppls names..
overall it was an okay drop seen you do alot better... next time try to be alittle more
complex , w/ your verse...and use better wordplay, and elevate your vocab
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