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Old 04-16-05, 03:33 PM   #15
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Voted For: J DOT

J DOT - dope shit, ya structure was a bit fucked wit them stretched lines, but ya flow was still on point!!! vocab was nice shit, u had some funny lines, personals were on form....i liked the opener, that shit was clever and funny!!! the ferris wheel line was gay....not feelin it...but i think that it was the only downer to ure verse.....nice wordplay n shit in there, just get more creative and try not to drop them gay ass lines!!! overall...7.5/10

9th Degree - ure flow was on point but like J DOT ya had a fucked structure. u had some gud hard hittin punches with some nice personals but like J Dot ya had times when ya came weak. ya opener wasn't all that gud and ure closer was just weak to, it was a nice attempt with the quote but i think ya cud've worked the punch better...ure wordplay was aight, the best part of ya verse was the read between the lines bar even tho that has been done before. u to need to get more creative with ya punches to but both dropped nice shit!!!

V/ - J Dot
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