Voted For: efecx

efecx

u cant make it rappin so u create a rapper n call it the apprentice
thats wat u are in rappin your still learnin how to write a sentence
^^^DECENT
u can go and drink coffee wit other people i murdered at central merk
every1 is talkin bout reincarnation and u talk about your first birth
^^^HA PRETTY GOOD
u see how smart he is on biography he says he is a rapper in the makin
ure battle record is now 0-0 but the record of 0-1 is in the creation
^^^O.K
i checked and see you got beaten by people called tommy guns and effect
u can add a new name 2 that list wit a note sayin i got merked by efecx
^^^IIGHT
people critize your work and say improve and your record will recoupe
so u take it to go work on your wordplay so u go and make alphabet soup
^^^AVERAGE CLOSURE

efecx- I LIKED MOST OF UR VERSE. THERE WERE SUM PRETTY GOOD PUNCHES AND THE PERSONALS WERE NICE TOO. SUM OF UR LINES WERE WEAK AND DIDNT REALLY HIT HARD. STRUCTURE WUZ NICE JUS WORK ON ELEVATIN N U B IIGHT.
8/10

lyrical mage

sticks an stones will break yo bones an words will always hurt you.
but since you facing a magician in my vision they about to merk you.
^^^DONT USE SAME WORD RHYMES
you beating me will never happen like jack da ripper doing jail time.
ill probably be punished if i get beat by nigga wit lame rhymes
^^^IIGHT
you was probably sittin down writing rhymes cause you almost
answered too late.
and when i beat you wit your written rhymes your excuse will be im trying to elevate
^^^GOOD 1
you knew you wouldnt fit in rv so you put an x at the end of your name to look cool
but if yo rhymes aint good yo name lookin like a damn fool.
^^^WTF? DONT UNDASTAND, NOT GOOD WEAK CLOSURE

lyrical mage- U NEED 2 ELEVATE LOTZ MORE SON. SUM OF UR PUNCHES HIT WHICH I LIKED, BUT SUM WERE JUS PLAIN WACK. THE CLOSURE DIDNT EVEN SEEM LIKE A CLOSURE. I THOUGHT THERE WUZ GONA B MO 2 COME, BUT UR VERSE JUS ENDED. U NEED 2 WORK ON MO METAZ N ELEVATE MORE. PRETTY WEAK VERSE
NO HATE JUS TELLIN DA TRUTH
5/10

MY V/EFECX B/C HE CAME MUCH HARDER

PLEASE RTF IN DA BATTLE IN MY SIG YALL PLEASE LEAVE AN HONEST VOTE N FEEDBACK 4 WHO U THINK WON.

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