aiiight, pretty nice, structure could use more consistancy, few lines were too stretched or not strecthed enuff, but that can be easily re-arranged with help

''...What crew you in I'll smack u u cant trust mah touch like midas...
...When his record gits fucked he gonna swear to god Strobe had artheritas...''
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the strobe line especially was sick as hell, lol loved it

i'd say yes right here right now

few problems tho'...
Kon is not online, so you gonna have ta play the old waiting game ta see what he says no matter what i say lol

also, i noticed you dont have a record yet?...Kon only likes active battlers, if u have any battle links with the voting yet ta be closed, please post them in here, if not....could u try gettin a battle...maybe 2, so we can see if your as consistant as the verse u dropped would suggest....

we'll get at u with a verdict, just sit tight an try gettin some battles in the mean time dawg.

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