Voted For: Newkid

Skriptz~

Fave Line-
Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes
He signed up for the punchline league...
.........................but he doesn't know what that is

Worst Line-
Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold
Only time you think your rhymes are dark...
.................................is when your typing in bold
^^^ The bold line Is playyed out

I liked your flow easy to read nice structure..Multis ehhh none


NewKid~

Fave line

yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er'
cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer'
^^ fuckin funny yo always good too make a reader laugh

Worst Line-

ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF'
n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl
ehhhh

Newkid your structure is bad yo DoNt TyPe LiKe ThIs aLl ThE T!m3.....Your humor was great...I dont like the way you pointed out the wording with the ' ' because they never had a space after....Just fix ya Structure But You win for punches...Multis ehhhh

Winner~:New Kid

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