Just making sure I can vote......


Your structure is still mad off, but I think you got it. Your had better punches, personals, and creativitie, thats why I gave you my vote. All you need to do is work on your structure and I think you got it.
Morse code- you verse was ight, but links are out now! I didnt click on em, so that took points away from ur verse cause tha personals were left questionable. Esco took this one homie. No hate. And most of ur personals were a lil played out and not hard hittin
overall-esco took this one with more preperation, creativitie, better punches & personals. no hate to none of yall, cause i dislike both of ya'll, just elevate...

RTF link in sig honest plz.

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