Voted For: diman

okie dokie...this was a nice battle....sweet, soft topic that you both worked off...it was kinda hard to decide who to vote for though, but it came down to reading them again, and how many lines i stopped at and really had good meaning.....cause both had nice emotion, great imagery.....so, you made it really hard to decide

DQ
So gradually climbing up the ladder of life and love
Safe and secure, excitement is what he fell short of
Tired eyes slowly closing, glass of whiskey in his hand
Questioning a path chosen even though it went as planned

diman
dont ask me the cause...of my soul's conviction. its vanished.
i want answers, why do i feel so hurt without actual physical damage?
my heart wont quit its panic, damnit. i guess its true the good die young.
cause the conent of my boy's heart was pure, so why remove my son?
i lay drowned in tears, with such a thirst i drank my adam's apple.
& have knowledge that simple existance, is now the hardest battle.

and thats basically how im doing this vote....these lines, i thought, really made an impact in both verses....and since diman had more that i pondered at.....im giving it to diman, but dont get me wrong DQ, you wrote an excellent verse, but i think diman edged it out ....keep up both

v/diman

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