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Old 04-17-05, 01:45 PM   #23
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Voted For: 9th Degree

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
nah...really weak sorry
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
weak simile cuz it doesnt really make sense, the line is like sayin ferris wheels ride dicks which idk
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
same...weak
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
better then the others
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
...
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
weak but better then last line


I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
descent opener
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
lol...good better
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
another good one
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
great personal i liked this punch a lot...
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack

Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
lol good...creative
(last line to the quote)
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
good closer

overall i think 9th won for sheer harder punches and personals, they were way more creative and all of Jdots lines just felt weak, no hate good luck to both

peace


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