Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: diman
I think Diman had more imagination and more knowledge in this one. I was feeling the verse. When I started reading it, I sunk into the character, and related to it. I think this was a flawless drop.
Dabatos-Nice verse, but I don't think you hit the topic good enough. Your verse seemed exactly what I thought it would be like when I read what the topic was. I just wasn't feeling it. No hate. I think you should work on your overall flow and learning how to stick with the topic.
Overall-I gave this one to Diman because I felt he came with more imagination and consistency in this one. He started off good and stayed that way from start to finish and that's what made his verse good.
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