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Old 04-17-05, 03:11 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by YOUNG_CITY
Voted For: diman

I think Diman had more imagination and more knowledge in this one. I was feeling the verse. When I started reading it, I sunk into the character, and related to it. I think this was a flawless drop.
Dabatos-Nice verse, but I don't think you hit the topic good enough. Your verse seemed exactly what I thought it would be like when I read what the topic was. I just wasn't feeling it. No hate. I think you should work on your overall flow and learning how to stick with the topic.
Overall-I gave this one to Diman because I felt he came with more imagination and consistency in this one. He started off good and stayed that way from start to finish and that's what made his verse good.


how does he have more knowledge?? its about our lives?
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