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Old 04-17-05, 06:18 PM   #13
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Voted For: iLL Cee

aight, not a bad battle

Ill Cee droppin that fire, humouress lyrics, nice structure, witty lines an the personals hit there mark, not much i can fault on the verse from Ill Cee....

Tommy? ya verse was aight, some decent ideas, structure was horrid tho, couldnt really find any flow an rythm when i was readin it, improve on ya structure, then holla at L.S....Cause i know u was trynna be down, good luck ta both yall in future battles, room for improvement from both, but ILL CEE Gets the win in my opinnon, more consistancy an each line was basically a punch or leading onto a punch

RTF

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