first of all...lmao...this is not eminem's "Till I Collapse" beat...this is some other shit but down to the breakdown

u sounded off flow alot of the time...lyrics could have been alot better...mic presence seemed a bit shaky...didn't seem that confident on the mic...beat could have been better and i mean way better...the biggest problem that i think u have is ya flow...if u were on point it would have made it sound better...

overall - 4/10

no hate