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Ha word , this shyt was dope
I was really feeling it , topic was alittle weird,
but shyt it was deep! ...you used lots of emotions ,
good feeling, nice imagery.. Structure was off
next time try to line up your bars..
Flow was good , and so was your vocab , and wordplay
overall nice job Q, keep it up , and i hope to see some
more work from you in the future , :Thumbsup:
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