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Hm.. this was a pretty decent drop..
Not much ..but it was something...
you used some pretty dope punchlines..
some nice vocab , and nice wordplay,
structure was UGH! ,try to match up your bars homie..
Not have them look like a heart pace..
overall keep it up , ... this was a decent drop..
not a topical piece..but more of a freestyle..
keep it up , and hope to see some more work from you in the future..
PS ropa link to an OM' you have left good feedback on or this will be closed
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