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Old 04-17-05, 09:11 PM   #11
Triple_N
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yea u lemme peep this on AIM...ya flow was good a lil too repetitive tho...your emotion was good, nice an laid-back but noticeable change ups....lyrically u didn't really say much...like omen said, u kept saying u the illest but u didn't say why....on a beat like this if u gon brag u should have ill punches and/or clever wordplay to wow people to give it that much more appeal...hook was decent jus seemed like multies was its focus....it wasn't really that catchy but decent enough to listen too...this would be a filler track on a album or mixtape...its very in btw.....not wack but not great neither jus okay.
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