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Old 04-17-05, 09:54 PM   #6
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feedback. yea beat is hot. 20 first up. some of ur punches come half assed. and you got emotion dont get me wrong but it seems like you need to be more original. like that back like a vertabre line was used word for word by ICP back in the day. and whatever patient line fiya was talkin bout is over used. i think ur havin writers block lately or something. lol banjo kazooi line was funny by gattaz was ill. i love ur steedz kiddo. arsenal line was aight from 20. u got potential 20, i just think u need to work on a few things. like, seems like ur headed towards what the industry likes and not doin you as much as u used too. no hate, just tryin to give some constructive feed. as for gattaz you got mad skillz you were completely original. just that 20 uses alot of other ppls lines alot. dunno if he knows or not cuz i know ive written lyrics and then realized i had to cut em cuz i found someone else who said something simalar. but yea, nyce track final should be good.
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