Ok room with a view....ya voice is cool....lyrics is cool but its another state of hip hop track..u using ya room as a metaphor its a nice concept but not a new one its very reminiscent of mos def, guru, talib, common, not really unique idea it jus told from your prospective...but I can def. appreciate a song about someone's appreciation for music..u talked about your life an surrounding an dats cool..chorus was mixed nicely not really unique once again very common sounding hook for this type of track...nice beat tho....it fit the topic nicely...it was a good track jus a common track for underground cats nowadays everyones trying to save hip hop..so "my love for music" plots are becoming tiresome....it woulda been better if ya metas were more indepth or if u had jus had more....rhymes where pretty simple...rhyme scheme was same thruoghout track...delivery was nice tho<--what made this somewhat interesting to listen too..ya delivery carried u.

Deliverence..yeah I always liked this beat...nice touch keeping timbaland on the hook....this plot is similar to "room with a view"....again the "rap is wack nowadays & I'm here to save it" theme.....an u didn't even spit it uniquely u spitting like everyone else that tries to do this topic...oh on second verse u change up an talk about ya gril good but expected again....an third verse u talked about ya people but all the verses sounded the same to me...your rhyme scheme in all ya verses was the same...u stick with the same 1 syllable simple vocab spits.....I was waiting for the rhyme scheme to change but u stayed the same for three verses...it got repetitive...but this hook is ill an the highlight of the track....lyrically this disappointing...first verse u ain't really say nothing....second verse u talked about ya situation for ya gurl in beginning then vered off then came back jus to fit the ending wher eu deliverce in there..really ain't say nothing...third verse was a common hater verse again not saying much....u got good quality made...jus your lyrics lack anytype of density....you got the simple style not really my steez but keep doing u...hope my feed helped..no hate jus realness......1

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