daaaaaaaaammnnnnnnnnnn

(haha)

Yeah man just givin some feed-back, back like I promised!
Well, this is more Spoken Word than a poem. You need to like, up your vocab.
Over all i felt the emo and see talent that some people are not blessed with.
YOU never put YOUR pen down.. keep writing..
Sweft

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