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Old 04-17-05, 11:42 PM   #8
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From: Adanac
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Voted For: Verbal

eeeee yeah....all the way one sided

king yayo...your stuff was too basic, not really any hard, creative punches in there....and last line was totally self-glorifying and not directed at verbal at all, and basically it contradicted the outcome cause you got merked, no offense/hate, but its probly cause you havn't battled for a while, word, well, hope you get back into your groove...word

verbal, not bad, had some complex stuff in there, creative too...but most of the concepts were played...you had decent wordplay to make them better though, so keep that up....last bar, it was pretty good, i laughed at it...and your opener was tight too, haha, laughed at it, just a couple chuckles, you look like you got a good grip on battling, keep up yo.....

v/verbal
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