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Old 04-18-05, 01:08 AM   #9
Triple_N
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Great beat choice...both of you flowed good..an both had good deliveries niether wa sincredible but good nonetheless an with that beat u can get away with having jus ok flow an delivery.....what made this track a disappoint is what commonly happens when catz do punchline brag tracks....y'all spit some weak punches...they was all basic similies using "like" alot...an was based on played concepts.....there was no "WOW" lines...an if u got no wows in a punchline drop u have failed....the common "I'm da shit" theme will never get old everyone does them jus being original when doing them is hard an y'all proved why...every common everyday thing u hear on radio has been used countless times...y'all fell into spitting lines that u hear on the radio daily...instead of spitting lines you'd "NEVER" hear on the radio....u gotta think outside the box..u want to have punches on the weirdest concepts...an stop using "like" in every line...there ar eother ways to word punches then using "like" all the time...the best punches usually have wordplay<--focus on that if u wanna have ill punches
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