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Old 04-18-05, 07:51 AM   #5
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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Sup led still dropping dopeness, it's funny how this is one of the best
topical verse's I have read this year, But some how nobody has droped
any feedback..

Any way the only thing that was a bit off in this verse was the
structure but that's not really important.

Great flow with nice inners it really gave the flow an extra kick
when used. Vocab on point, with some dope emotion..

This is how to write a topical,.. Stay up man

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