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Old 04-18-05, 10:35 AM   #74
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

this was a pretty decent battle

Mark:
ta verse was aight, some parts seemed a little forced tho
''His Elevation System Is Like 5 Years Olds Going Down Hills''
^^^
tat line seemed force for example

on the whole, ya verse was somewhat creative in parts, nice wordplay here n there, punches could an may have been harder in some lines (especially the opener, could of used your idea much more effectively)....ya verse was okay, like i said, somewhat forced in places, so it took the effect out of the punches & personals...

Squad:
sick verse man, flow was right on point, disses was hard hittin an worded perfectly, the closer killed the whole battle off lol, ''hispanic nick lanchey''....very creative an a good personal also, not much i can fault within your verse, you got my vote...

RTF Y'all..
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